Wednesday, October 26, 2011

MJ #11: Broken Glass: A Halloween Myth


The wind brushed its soft fingers through her dress, teasing her ankles to move. With an inward smile she obliged, turning her toes toward the next house. The pale fire in her eyes glanced upward, flirting with the moon. The countdown had begun.
Mercy rippled down the pavement, wondering at the glints that didn’t used to be there. Dew, she thought.  A closer inspection proved otherwise. Glass. Broken glass. She frowned at it for a moment before turning into the driveway.  More shimmers here, unnecessary and distracting.
She extended her glove in front of her with a slight gasp of excitement. Extending… extending… her finger connected with the doorbell and she froze. Mercy let out a squeal of glee and pushed the little white button. The resounding cacophony of static-like noise pounded into Mercy’s fragile frame.
“Trick-o-treat!”
An older woman garbed in robes a foot-and-a-half too short and a flopped over witch cap appeared in the silhouette of sunshine.
Mercy blinked at the inconsistency.
“Hello?”
“Ah. Yes. Could you perhaps do something about that repulsive glass in your front yard?”
“Hello?”
Mercy frowned.
“Yes! Right here! Could you please move the shimmer? It’s quite distracting.”
“Huh. Must of run off…”
The shabby witch woman began the door’s journey to its initial position.  Mercy swung her foot in the doorway.  The door slammed.  She thrust her face accusingly at the moon as she slid her foot out of the wood. Time’s up. Until next year.
And that’s when the rift between the world’s sucked her soul back in.
Until next year…

1 comment:

  1. Does the character name "Mercy" make this a parable at all? This is a great piece of "sudden fiction": accomplishing so much in characterization, situation, and theme in just a moment's prose.

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